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She knew she was turning her back from happiness... from the guy who had given her everything, love, hope, comfort, respect and ultimately freedom. She felt small, she wished she could shrink and hide somewhere.


He had made it easy for her.. giving her the push, the courage to admit her own feelings and finally letting her go. It killed him to see her go.


The pain pierced her insides and she was numbed, humbled by his sacrifice.She valued his love. She gathered the fragments of her broken heart. I'll live again. I promise.


8 comments:

She should probably realize that there are people 'pushing' us in different quantities and different ways, unknown to her..

She should probably learn to live with the promise that she was worthy of love.. and capable of loving in return..

She should probably feel that things could have been otherwise.. but the two of them should probably cherish the times they lived and loved a life together..

She should probably not know me.. but do tell her that I love her.. for we are all bound together by an invisible thread of misery.. but in our misery, we are no more lonely.. but bound by a solidarity that supports us in our quandaries..

Jeremiah Surge, bound by misery..so true. I'm sure chidiya would feel better with time.tc da!

Its not always happiness in getting what you love. Sometimes letting go can bring in immense happiness in the purest form. If its true love then happiness is in happiness of your loved one.

Remembered a very old thought

'Let your love go, if it returns it was yours else it was never yours', might be irrelevant but this crossed my mind immediately i read this post of urs.

Keep writing!

Abhi, quite right.. It gives you happiness yes, but it's always laced with heartaches and misery :)

Thanks for dropping by after a long time.. !

:) lets not talk about miseries you know :P

on a serious note, agreed to each word of urs!

well, had been caught up with stuff, and thus not able to follow blogs. Hopefully I'll frequent from now on :))

it is too good...makes me wonder :) :) i like it and how are you...coming here after a long time :)

Like the Solitary Writer, I thought I would amble in...its been a while..I hope I am not crashing in or something...
And whats with you? Hey, its just life right? Not Homers Odessey or something is it? So just relax...if worse comes to worst, look at me and take a bite of my life. I used to be (and hopefully still am) a dark fiction writer..I am doing comic strips now! :D

Cheer up eh? Have an ice cream or something! :)
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Solitary writer, I'm good.. howdy? :)

Scribbler's,
Okay, you are exploring.. more variety. But simply looved your dark stories.

@Kol, I would rather go with the different pastries and sweets!

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