Come down..I have a surprise for you.
Now..why?
Just like that.
Keep it for tomorrow.Shall see it in the morning.
It can't wait.15 mins max..I promise.
Ok..what is it? flowers?
No.Something you said you like.
Ice creams?
No..Now stop guessing.Come down.I shall pick you up.You don't even have to ride.
No..thats fine.
Ok..I am waiting downstairs.So hurry up.
She wondered what he was up to this time..cauliflower bouquets,a chain with a star pendant,hand cooked crabs,ice creams,Marlboro mint cigarettes..he had surprised her enough for the day.And now there was something more...The guy is mad,she knew for sure.
She found him waiting at the gate.She started her vehicle.
Where are we going?
Just follow me.
She followed.They crossed the flyover and headed towards the VIP area.She loved that locality.It had wide roads with trees lined on either side,street lamps that cast white lights and less people.There was a gentle breeze blowing.She felt it in her hair..and smiled.It was lovely.
He slowed down his vehicle and said,You love it,don't you?
She looked at him and grinned.You are mad.
Thanks.. he said flashing a wide smile.
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35 comments:
awww.....that was so simple yet so romantic!! you know it was so strange that i was listening to Daughtry's "No Surprise" when i saw ur blog updated with this post.
i loved it. *sigh*
wish i have someone so romantic too (:
Shruti,thank you dear.Don't worry,"someday,some way.." :)
hahaha.. he is very much like me... i love his attitude.. salutes!!!
chriz.. Wow..!! :D
Awww...how cute :)
Ye to pakka true story hai! ;) :P
fuck!!! super cute!!!
yeh to meri kahani hai..!!!
that was soo sweet..
I love such surprises... giving and receiving :)
take care da... have a nice day... cheers...
simple and sweet :)
aww...thats one interesting writes....supercool
:)
u had been to our locality? I never knew u loved it...that was a surprise for me ;)
simple pleasures of life :-)
:)
it al cmz so naturally t u..eh?
beautifully simple write up. u jus alwaz KNOW wher t stop :)
gr8 gr8 gr8..
grinnin away...ahhh 2 be in luv :D
Small, cute , amazing!!! but more amazing i guess is your imagination and the things you do to love and romance...
hats off!!
@shanu, grins..thanks :D
@Abhi, arey bahut samajhdar ho..! :P
@vikas,haan bhai..sahi hai!
Amal Bose,Thanks mate.. :)
Arv,me too..i love surprises. :D
Have a great day..cheers!
Twinkle,just like you :D
solitary writer,Thanks mate.. :)
Samir,kain re? ama area re bhi vip locality achi.. ;)
eye-in-sty-in,indeed buddy!
scarlet thunder,yes..it's very important to know where to stop else it can mar the effect.Thank you :)
blunt edges.. I know ,I know :)
paranoid android..Thank you..*bows and accepts*
Thanks for visiting my blog and giving lovely comment.You are welcome in my other blogs too.
Very beautiful post.I liked it very much.
sahi! :)
Simple short and sweet baby!
Drop by mine for the greatest love story ever! Yea surprise surprise maine bhi love story likha hain :D
Nice story..Nice pic too... I don't know why men always gives surprise to women in romance.... never heard of stories like women giving surprise to men.
I loved this story :) As always!
I passed some awards your way!
Babli,thank you madame :)
Dphatsez,kya mast story tha yaar really..it indeed was a sweet love story :D
Shankar,aah dear.. women do give surprises but men always give the stupidest of reactions then. :P
Foreign desi..Thank you so much darling. :)
My first visit to your blog...hehe so sweet i thought..is cute
@illeen... but women do love those stupidest reactions...
Ani-aset,Thank you mate..hope u revisit :)
@shankar.. true :)
Well it was romantic no doubt!!!
But its a crazier world with crazier people!!
Prepare yourself..!!!
I know u r crazy Duds..surprise me with a visit sometime. :)
he he.. nice one.. wld have been nice if she would have let him pick her up...[:P]
beautiful!!!
Loved it, yaar... :) Keep writing!
Peace.
lol...ullu ko ullu bana diya :D
theres so much creativity in this madness!!! i wud have loved this craziness...cauliflower bouquets..lolz..
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